Wednesday, June 27, 2007

Alcoholism

Alcoholism stalks us in the night
Dressed in a crisp, black suit
Disappearing into a Vodka bottle as it takes your soul.

Alcoholism haunts us as we try to sleep in our king sized bed
Sneaking into our dreams disguised as a friend wearing a t-shirt
But drags us to depression as a child forced to eat broccoli

Alcoholism whispers to us while we try to teach or preach
Sauntering through the front door wearing promises of happiness
Begging us for only one sip

Alcoholism assaults us in solitude
Clothed in a familiar tattered phrase
“One drink can’t hurt.”

2 comments:

Kris said...

Powerful! You have such unusual metaphors and similes. Mine always sound like cliches. Anyone who feels their life is being controlled by an outside force can relate to this poem. Keep up your writing!

Kris

tbutler said...

I like it! Alcoholism is such a common problem that I think most people could relate to your poem.